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Showing posts with label Marginal notes. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Marginal notes. Show all posts

Wednesday, January 10, 2024

King James Whole Marginal Notes

In An Exhaustive Listing of the Marginal Notes of the 1611 edition of the King James Bible Calvin George wrote, “At least 9 entire verses were rewritten in marginal notes.” In his Lesson 212 The AV 1611: Examining The Marginal Notes, Bryan Ross mentioned this comment by George. Alex Hanna compiled a list of all such verses at the Literatura Bautista web site. (He found twelve.)

Twelve Whole Verse Alternative Renderings
  1. 1 Samuel 3:7 Now Samuel did not yet know the LORD, neither was the word of the LORD yet revealed unto him: Or, thus did Samuel, before he knew the LORD; and before the word of the LORD was revealed unto him
  2. 2 Kings 19:25 Hast thou not heard long ago how I have done it, and of ancient times that I have formed it? now have I brought it to pass, that thou shouldest be to lay waste fenced cities into ruinous heaps: Or, Hast thou not heard how I have made it long ago, and formed it of ancient times? Should I now bring it to be laid waist, and fenced cities to be ruinous heaps?
  3. Job 19:26 And though after my skin worms destroy this body, yet in my flesh shall I see God: Or, After I shall awake though this body be destroyed, yet out of my flesh shall I see God
  4. Job 40:24 He taketh it with his eyes: his nose pierceth through snares: Or, will any take him in his sight? or bore his nose with a ginn?
  5. Psalm 120:3 What shall be given unto thee?: Or, what shall the deceitful tongue give unto thee? or what shall it profit thee?
  6. Psalm 120:4 Sharp arrows of the mighty, with coals of juniper: Or, It is as the sharp arrows of the mighty man with coals of juniper
  7. Psalm 121:1 I will lift up mine eyes unto the hills, from whence cometh my help: Or, shall I lift up mine eyes to the hills? whence should my help come?
  8. Proverbs 17:10 A reproof entereth more into a wise man, than an hundred stripes into a fool: Or, a reproof aweth more a wise man, then to strike a fool an hundred times
  9. Proverbs 25:23 The North wind driveth away rain, so doeth an angry countenance a backbiting tongue: Or, The North wind bringeth forth rain, so doeth a backbiting tongue, an angry countenance
  10. Proverbs 26:10 The great God that formed all things both rewardeth the fool, and rewardeth transgressors: Or, a great man grieveth all, and he hireth the fool, he hireth also transgressors
  11. Isaiah 37:26 Hast thou not heard long ago, how I have done it; and of ancient times, that I have formed it? now have I brought it to pass, that thou shouldest be to lay waste defenced cities into ruinous heaps: Or, Hast thou not heard how I have made it long ago, and formed it of ancient times? Should I now bring it to be laid waste, and defenced cities to be ruinous heaps?
  12. 2 Timothy 2:6 The husbandman that laboureth, must be first partaker of the fruits: Or, the husbandman laboring first must be partaker of the fruits
Ten *Honorable Mentions* (either most of the verse, “Or” or “More Literal”)
  • Exodus 32:29 For Moses had said, Consecrate yourselves today to the LORD, even every man upon his son, and upon his brother: Or, And Moses said, Consecrate yourselves today to the LORD, because every man hath been against his son, and against his brother, etc
  • 2 Samuel 20:18 They were wont to speak in old time, saying, They shall surely ask counsel at Abel: and so they ended the matter: Or, they plainly spake in the beginning, saying, surely they will ask of Abel; and so make an end
  • 1 Chronicles 21:20 And Ornane turned back and saw the Angel, and his four sons with him hid themselves: Or, When Ornan turned back, and saw the Angel, then he and his four sons with him, hid themselves
  • Jeremiah 25:35 And the shepherds shall have no way to flee, nor the principal of the flock to escape: Heb. flight shall perish from the shepherds, and escaping from, etc.
  • Amos 2:13 I am pressed under you, as a cart is pressed that is full of sheaves: Or, I will press your place as a cart full of sheaves presseth
  • Psalm 89:18 the LORD is our defense, and the holy One of Israel is our king: Or, our shield is of the LORD, and our king is of the holy One of Israel
  • Psalm 140:11 evil speaker be established in the earth, evil shall hunt the violent man to overthrow him: Heb. a man of tongue, or, an evil speaker, a wicked man of violence be established in the earth, let him be hunted to his overthrow
  • Psalm 141:5 Let the righteous smite me, it shall be a kindness, and let him reprove me, it shall be an excellent oil, which shall not break my head: Or, let the righteous smite me kindly, and reprove me, let not their precious oil break my head, etc.
  • Jeremiah 18:14 the snow of Lebanon which cometh from the rock of the field? or shall the cold flowing waters that come from another place be forsaken?: Or, my fields for a rock, or for the snow of Lebanon? shall the running waters be forsaken for the strange cold waters?
  • Hebrews 2:16 took not on him the nature of Angels, but he took on him the seed of Abraham: Gr. he taketh not hold of Angels, but of the seed of Abraham he taketh hold

On October 29, 2023, Brian Ross updated this with the lesson The AV 1611: Examining The Marginal Notes (Complete & Partial Verse Rewrites) with associated PDF notes.

Tuesday, January 09, 2024

King James Bible Marginal Notes

In the May 17, 2022 essay “Reading the 1611 Bible,” I included a brief paragraph on the marginal notes in this 1611 translation. On September 24, 2023, Bryan Ross published a good video lesson called “The AV 1611: Examining The Marginal Notes.” This encouraged me to expand and enlarge my comments on the marginal notes into something more comprehensive.

Early historical references to the marginal notes.

1603. King James on marginal notes, at the Hampton Court Conference

[Doctor Reinolds] moved his Majesty, that there might be a new Translation of the Bible…Whereupon his Highnesse wished, that some special paines should be taken in that behalf for one uniform ..And so this whole Church to be bound unto it, and none other…withall, he gave this caveat (upon a word cast out by my Lord of London) that no Marginal Notes should be added, having found in them which are annexed to the Geneva translation…some Notes very partial, untrue, seditious, and favouring too much of dangerous, and traitorous conceits.

The Summe and Substance of the Conference…at Hampton Court, Jan. 14. 1603 (William Barlow, Clerkenwell, UK: Bye and Law, Printers, 1804, pp. 34-35).

1604. Two of the King James’s Translation Rules that relate to marginal notes.

  • 6. No Marginal Notes at all to be affixed, but only for the explanation of the Hebrew or Greek Words, which cannot without some circumlocution, so briefly and fitly be expressed in the Text.
  • 7. Such Quotations of Places to be marginally set down as shall serve for the fit Reference of one Scripture to another.

The transcription of these rules is as they appear in In The Beginning: The Story of the King James Bible and How It Changed a Nation, a Language, and a Culture, (Alister Edgar McGrath, New York, NY: Random House, Inc., 2001, pp. 173-175). Three manuscript copies of the translators’ rules are extant.  According to David Norton in his A Textual History of the King James Bible, these are in the British Library: BL Add. 28721, fol. 24r; BL Harley 750; and BL Egerton 2884 fol. 6r. The first two contain 14 rules, and “BL Egerton” includes rule 15. This at least suggests that the first 14 were drawn up originally, and then rule 15 was added later.

1611. Miles Smith in “The Translators to the Reader

Reasons Moving Us To Set Diversity of Senses in the Margin, where there is Great Probability for Each

Some peradventure would have no variety of senses to be set in the margin, lest the authority of the Scriptures for deciding of controversies by that show of uncertainty, should somewhat be shaken. But we hold their judgment not to be so sound in this point. For though, whatsoever things are necessary are manifest, as S. Chrysostom saith, and as S. Augustine, In those things that are plainly set down in the Scriptures, all such matters are found that concern Faith, Hope, and Charity. Yet for all that it cannot be dissembled, that partly to exercise and whet our wits, partly to wean the curious from loathing of them for their every-where plainness, partly also to stir up our devotion to crave the assistance of God’s spirit by prayer, and lastly, that we might be forward to seek aid of our brethren by conference, and never scorn those that be not in all respects so complete as they should be, being to seek in many things ourselves, it hath pleased God in his divine providence, here and there to scatter words and sentences of that difficulty and doubtfulness, not in doctrinal points that concern salvation, (for in such it hath been vouched that the Scriptures are plain) but in matters of less moment, that fearfulness would better beseem us than confidence, and if we will resolve, to resolve upon modesty with S. Augustine, (though not in this same case altogether, yet upon the same ground) Melius est dubitare de occultis, quam litigare de incertis, it is better to make doubt of those things which are secret, than to strive about those things that are uncertain. There be many words in the Scriptures, which be never found there but once, (having neither brother nor neighbor, as the Hebrews speak) so that we cannot be holpen by conference of places. Again, there be many rare names of certain birds, beasts and precious stones, etc. concerning which the Hebrews themselves are so divided among themselves for judgment, that they may seem to have defined this or that, rather because they would say something, than because they were sure of that which they said, as S. Jerome somewhere saith of the Septuagint. Now in such a case, doth not a margin do well to admonish the Reader to seek further, and not to conclude or dogmatize upon this or that peremptorily? For as it is a fault of incredulity, to doubt of those things that are evident: so to determine of such things as the Spirit of God hath left (even in the judgment of the judicious) questionable, can be no less than presumption. Therefore as S. Augustine saith, that variety of Translations is profitable for the finding out of the sense of the Scriptures: so diversity of signification and sense in the margin, where the text is no so clear, must needs do good, yea, is necessary, as we are persuaded. We know that Sixtus Quintus expressly forbiddeth, that any variety of readings of their vulgar edition, should be put in the margin, (which though it be not altogether the same thing to that we have in hand, yet it looketh that way) but we think he hath not all of his own side his favorers, for this conceit. They that are wise, had rather have their judgments at liberty in differences of readings, than to be captivated to one, when it may be the other. If they were sure that their high Priest had all laws shut up in his breast, as Paul the Second bragged, and that he were as free from error by special privilege, as the Dictators of Rome were made by law inviolable, it were another matter; then his word were an Oracle, his opinion a decision. But the eyes of the world are now open, God be thanked, and have been a great while, they find that he is subject to the same affections and infirmities that others be, that his skin is penetrable, and therefore so much as he proveth, not as much as he claimeth, they grant and embrace.

1618. Three comments on marginal notes from the “Report on the Making of the Version of 1611 Presented to the Synod of Dort.”

  • …no notes were to be placed in the margin, but only parallel passages to be noted.
  • …where a Hebrew or Greek word admits two meanings of a suitable kind, the one was to be expressed in the text, the other in the margin. The same to be done where a different reading was found in good copies.
  • …the more difficult Hebraisms and Graecisms were consigned to the margin.

How many marginal notes, and other comments.

F. H. A. Scrivener supplies the following count of marginal notes in the original 1611 Bible newly translated by the order of King James.

  • Old Testament 6,637 (“4111 express a more literal meaning…2156 give alternative readings…in 63 the meaning of Proper names is stated…in 240 necessary information is given by way of harmonizing the text with other passages of Scripture…the remaining 67 refer to various readings of the original text”)
  • Apocrypha 1,018
  • New Testament 765 (“35 relate to various readings…112 present us with a more literal rendering…582 are alternative translations, 35 are explanatory notes
  • Total 8,418

“On the marginal notes and the original texts of the Authorized Version of the English Bible,” The Cambridge Paragraph Bible of the Authorized English Version (Frederick Henry Ambrose, Scrivener, Cambridge: University Press, 1873, pp. xxiv-xxxii)

Scrivener says that 494 marginal notes were added by editors of later editions (in 1629, 1638, 1762, and 1769). Timothy Berg points to a slightly different modern computer total: 6,565 marginal notes in the OT, and 777 in the NT, for a total of 7,342 marginal notes, not counting the Apocrypha. This seems to be taken from the count that Calvin George gives: “There are 6,565 marginal notes in the OT, and 777 in the NT, for a total of 7,342 marginal notes.” Berg also suggests dividing the marginal notes into five types rather than three.

The types of marginal notes or references.

King James wanted “no Marginal Notes…added.” Considering the outcome, this restriction was not absolute, but referred to the types of marginal notes that filled the Geneva Bible – religious and theological commentary, similar to what we moderns might think of as a “Study Bible.” Though not often mentioned, the Bishop’s Bible also had study notes that included theological commentary.[i] By restricting these notes, the genius of the new translation avoided outwardly supporting the views of either the Puritans or the established Episcopacy.[ii] The rules set before the translators confirm this desire of the King – “No Marginal Notes at all to be affixed, but only…” Rule 6 allows for necessary explanation of original language words that would not fit succinctly within the text itself. Rule 7 suggests cross references “of one Scripture to another.”

In “Translators to the Reader,” Miles Smith does not detail the extent of the use of marginal notes, but rather is defending their use with “Reasons Moving Us To Set Diversity of Senses in the Margin.” In doing so, he gives examples of some types of notes used.  Notes are found in places of difficulty – such as words used only once, rare names, etc. – and notes of these kinds will “admonish the Reader to seek further.”

Samuel Ward’s explanation before the Synod of Dort corresponds with the three symbols used in marking marginal notes. He indicates they were used for cross references, alternate readings, and difficult readings.

Illustration. Isaiah 53:5-6

This picture with information to the left of the two verses from Isaiah 53:5-6 illustrates the three different symbols used to lead to marginal notes: asterisk, dagger (or cross), and double bar (*, †, ||). The asterisk (*) denotes a cross reference to a related scripture or scriptures. The dagger, (†) indicates a more literal translation (prefaced by Heb., Chal., or Gr., followed by a word or words in italics). The double bar (||) points to an alternate reading (|| Or, followed by a word or words in italics).

Based on the three symbols used, as well as the period references to or explanations of the marginal notes, we can conclude there are three types of marginal references in the 1611 King James Bible. At least one type admits of sub-categories. These may possibly be confused at times by the printer using the wrong symbol.
  • Cross reference
  • More literal translation
  • Alternate reading
The third category might be subdivided to explain what kinds of alternate readings are noticed, such as a simple alternate reading (e.g., Job 30:29 ), definitions or explanations of names (e.g., Genesis 22:14), and reference to a reading in another TR (e.g., 2 Peter 2:2).
  • Job 30:29  owles || Or, ostriches.
  • Genesis 22:14 Jehovah-jireh || That is, The LORD will see, or, provide.
  • 2 Peter 2:2 || Or, lascivious wayes, as some copies reade.
Within the Apocrypha another type of system is also used, a small roman letter (a, b, c, d, etc.) in the text corresponding to a small roman letter in the margin. See example below from I Esdras 5:22-26.

Concluding thoughts.

Inspecting the marginal readings in the 1611 translation made by the order of King James provides evidence that the translators carefully followed rules 6 and 7. They provided notes of the kinds approved, and avoided partisan theological commentary. They were scrupulous or meticulous in ways that give insight into their thinking and choices (e.g., sometimes showing what they left out). It appears the printers made a few errors in their use of the symbols, For example, to me Genesis 22:14 and Genesis 28:19 seem to be the same type of note, yet one is marked with the double bar (||) and the other with the dagger (†). On the other hand, some argument could be made for why certain notes could be marked either way.

Over the years the original marginal notes have dropped out. The primary reason is that it saves the publishers time, space, and money. One can read the King James translation, learn from and be blessed by it, and live a Christian life according to it – without ever knowing the original contained these marginal notes. However, the notes can be instructive to all.  Especially one who intends to engage in King James Bible and modern version debates should become familiar with them.

[i] For example, this page shows commentary on Acts 13:34, 50-51; 14:4, 7, 19, 23. 
[ii] Paul V. M. Flesher, professor in University of Wyoming’s Department of Religious Studies, explains: “Archbishop Bancroft pioneered a new approach to Bible translation, one which helped the translation overcome the political and religious conflict in which the project was conceived...Archbishop Bancroft...was a partisan bulldog for the Church of England establishment. Yet, he guided the creation of a new Bible translation that lasted for more than four centuries and was accepted by most branches of Protestant Christianity.”